Thursday, 11 November 2010

The Garden at Midnight

Not sure if this counts as a story, or flash fiction, or a poem, or what. Anyway, read and enjoy, comment if you want!

Let’s go outside. Yes, let’s. Let’s go outside and walk in the garden.

 It’s too hot in here, don’t you think?

 With the fires and the candles reflected in the windows and mirrors, like hundreds of tiny stars, and the smoke and the wine spilled on the marble floor and the women’s perfume and men’s aftershave and the music and the laughter weighing down.

 Can’t you feel it?

 It’s so heavy, falling down all around us, draping over the bare shoulders of the girls and wrapping itself around the dancing, the swirling couples, tangling our legs and tripping us. Thick and heavy and soft, like the velvet drapes, smothering us, rocking us gently to sleep in the drowsiness of the merriment.

 Quick! Quick! Outside while we still can, out into the peace of the garden at midnight.

 Ah, there, isn’t that better?

 You can barely here the music now, can you? And all of the people might as well not be there. They’re just ghosts, really, moving about silently through the smoke and the music, laughing in silence, like those old black and white movies and you can see where the film’s coming apart.

 It’s so peaceful out here, with the little fountain singing quietly to itself and the rose bushes, the pale little dancers in the green dresses swaying in the dark. Have you ever smelt anything so sweet?

 Stand there, just there, and you can feel their scent as it rolls across the gardens.

 Can’t you feel it?

 If only they knew, those stupid women, the ones who wrap jasmine and sunflower and a million other exotic scents around themselves, if only they knew the beauty of the roses in the dark, or could feel the grass and the damp earth in the air as it caresses your body, as it hangs off you and lifts you up, up towards the moon.

 The moon!

 Look at it, look, up there, see? And the stars!

 So pale and beautiful, reflected in the softly singing fountain. So bright too, and pure. Much better than their candles and fires.

 We should tell them, shouldn’t we? Tell them to put out the torches, to light up the moon, to light up the stars! Let them shine in the darkness!

 Oh no, not cold. Not cold at all. Well, maybe a little.
 But there’s enough here, don’t you think? Enough light, enough heat, enough music, enough and enough.

 And look, there in the corner, a little apple tree! I wonder if there’s any fruit. No, no you’re right; it’s too early, far too early to be thinking about that sort of thing. Let’s not think about the harvest until we have to. Enjoy the night while we can.

 Come on, let’s dance!

 Music, yes, of course, of course the fountain will sing for us, won’t it? Tired of the soft soliloquies and the droopy roses, aren’t you?

 But they do look droopy, don’t you think? And tired. Perhaps they need to rest. Yes, sleep deep and peaceful in your beds, we’ll tell the others to keep it down, that the flowers need their rest.

 Me? No I’m not tired at all.

 Another drink? Well, I’m sure that the fountain… no, you’re right, perhaps not.

 Oh, look, fishes!

 Yes, there are. See? There and there, little tiny silvery and gold ones, going round in little circles.

 Reflections? No, not reflections. Fish.

 Back inside? But it’s so nice out here, don’t you think?

 So peaceful, and… and…

 I suppose you’re right.

 Goodbye little garden. Sleep tight little roses; sing them a lullaby, Fountain, won’t you? Perhaps the fish will sing the harmony, if you ask them nicely. Goodbye, beautiful moon and tiny, shiny stars.

 Goodbye.

 Goodbye.

Wednesday, 10 November 2010

Couple's Retreat

This story was originally written for my school magazine. It was, however, sensored (the evil so and so's). So here's the original version in all its glory...

 The plane had been delayed taking off, but Jean hadn’t expected any better from British Airways. As though to compensate for leaving a quarter of an hour late, the plane managed to land a minute early. Fancy that, a full minute!
 “They’ll balance it out.” Mark had mused as they left the aircraft “Chances are the luggage will be in Istanbul.”
 “Or Geneva” Jean added.
 “Or both.”
 As it happened, the Gods had smiled on the young couple and theirs were two of the first to bags to arrive through the carousel. Sometimes miracles do happen, even where BA is concerned.
 Now they were in the rental car, speeding down the road from Rome to Naples. Jean sat in the passenger seat, with a map which was, rather bewilderingly, written in German, and tried to focus on the glimpses of Italian countryside she could see between the barriers on the motorway’s edge. Mark was driving, weaving in and out of the traffic at a speed which Jean was trying to ignore, and swearing at the other drivers under his breath.
 “I still don’t see why we couldn’t have flown straight to Naples.” Jean sighed as she fidgeted with the archaic radio.
 “I told you; this way we save more than a hundred pounds and didn’t have to be up at some ungodly hour.” Mark growled, coming dangerously close to hitting some idiot on a motorbike, who was acting like a complete lunatic (which is to say, like a typical Italian on a bike) “Besides, this way we got to see a bit of Rome, too.”
 This last was true; the couple had enjoyed all of the beauty of Rome that one can see when leaving Fiumicino airport and heading to Campania; namely a Giorgio Armani building and an industrial zone.
 “I suppose you’re right.” Jean sighed again, and reached across to gently place her hand on Mark’s knee. Although they had been together for nearly three years (the trip was to celebrate their anniversary) – and she did love him, really – she was beginning to wonder whether their relationship was going anywhere, and whether, once they had returned to England, they should spend some time apart. “The important thing is that we’re together, and we’ll be at the hotel soon.”
 “Bloody wanker.” Mark muttered, distracted by Jean’s hand, and the thought of the diamond ring that nestled in his jacket pocket “Why can’t these people drive on the right side of the road?”