Friday, 1 November 2013

The Lady In Grey: An All Hallow's Read

 Way back in the dim and distant past (2010), Neil Gaiman came up with a new tradition for Halloween. Yes, I did just use the phrase 'new tradition', and no, I'm not going to apologise for it. At all.

 This new tradition (there, I did it again, just to prove how unashamed I am of this illogical and flagrantly anti-traditional idea) was called 'All Hallow's Read', and it is very simple. On or around Halloween, you give a book, or story, or comic, to someone as a gift. The book can be old or new, and the recipient can be a friend, family member, or total stranger. (Disclaimer: like sweets, books from strangers should be treated with the utmost caution, kids.) The only real rule is this: they must be scary.

 I love the idea behind this, because people simply don't share literature enough these days. Some of the most interesting conversations I've ever had have been those discussing books read, not for school or work, but for pleasure. Moreover, horror novels are so much more scary than horror films. It's just a fact. And sharing is caring.

 Here's a video in which Mr Gaiman talks about All Hallow's Read. Those figures in the background are people who prefer film and TV over literature. You can also find out more about All Hallow's Read here.




 In the spirit of All Hallow's Read, I've decided to give everyone a little gift. This is one of the first horror stories I wrote. In fact, it's one of the first stories I wrote, period. It won me a prize for one of the monthly competitions at Cardiff Univerity's Creative Writing Society (but not the month you might expect). Alumni from a certain prep school in Chichester, West Sussex will probably recognise the legend behind it, and I am thus indebted to the generations of schoolboys (and schoolgirls) who came before me.


The Lady In Grey

 Of the three matrons at West Street Boarding School, Marion was the favourite.

 Marion had never been married. She had been engaged once, long ago, and still wore her engagement ring on a chain around her neck, together with a small, simple cross which had belonged to her fiancée. She never told anyone about it, of course. Just like she never told anyone about the day that she had returned home from work, only to find the building engulfed in flames. She never spoke about her dead fiancée, and she always kept the ring hidden from sight. She wore, at all times, simple grey clothing, having decided that black was too severe a colour to wear twenty years after the fire, and had earned the nickname ‘The Grey Lady’ from the boys under her care.

 She had lost her eye- indirectly- because of the fire. The fire that had burnt down her home, that had killed her lover. She had stood outside their house, watching as the firemen battled the inferno, fighting back her tears. And then something hit her in the eye. There was a moment of searing pain, in her eye, which she quickly managed to brush away. An ember had blown into her eye, damaging its surface. Although she had thought little of it at the time, (who would, at a time like that?) the wound became infected and, a few months later, she returned to her mother’s house from the hospital, her right eye replaced with a sphere of glass. The fire that had robbed her of everything she owned, of her future as a wife and a mother, had also partially robbed her of sight.

 Marion loved all of the boys under her care, with the possible exception of Jack.

 Jack was, to Marion, everything that was bad about children. The student was, like so many others, a chorister. But while most of the other boys were quiet and polite as a result of the extensive time spent in the Cathedral, Jack was the exact opposite. His talent as a singer had made him arrogant, and too many midnight feasts had made him fat.

 When Marion found Jack stealing sweets from other boys, she punished him. That night, Jack was sent to bed before the other boys, without his evening snack. That night, Jack decided to get his revenge.

The dormitory in which Jack slept was called Long Dorm. It was a large wood-panelled room which was both too cold in the winter and too hot in the summer. It had twenty beds, although only twelve of them were occupied. The room had hard, wooden floorboards, which gave any boy who walked across the room without shoes a foot full of splinters. In the far corner, behind a locked door, was a spiral staircase which led all the way through the building to the ground floor, and served as the fire escape.  In the event of a fire, or a drill, it was Marion’s job to wake the boys, unlock the door, and lead them down the narrow staircase to the safety of the school playground outside.

That night, Marion woke with the sound of the fire alarm blaring in her ears. She was out of her bed and on her feet before she was fully awake, striding down the hallway to Long Dorm. She knew that this couldn’t be a drill; she wouldn’t have gone to bed if there had been one planned. As she passed a staircase leading down to the rest of the school, she smelt smoke. She quickened her pace, trying to move as quickly as possible without appearing panicked.

She entered the room and flicked on the lights, quietly pleased to see that most of the boys were already out of bed, sleepily pulling on their dressing gowns and slippers and shuffling towards the door to the spiral staircase. Jack was already there, waiting by the locked door. For a few boys, the only response to the alarm had been to drag the covers over their heads. Normally, Jack would have been one of them. A moment of suspicion flared in her before she fought it down. Jack was a prankster and a bully, yes, but even he wouldn’t set fire to the school. Would he?

 With all of the boys out of their beds, Marion began struggling with the old, stiff lock of the disused door. Behind her, the boys stood in a ragged crowd, some chattering with excitement, some fidgeting nervously, some practically falling asleep again where they stood. Only Jack remained entirely still, waiting at Marion’s elbow.

Marion stood at the top of the staircase, feeling in the dark for the light switch. Just as she reached it, she felt a pressure in the small of her back. She turned as she fell, and saw Jack’s grinning face framed by the light which spilled out of the dormitory. She fell through the darkness, bouncing off one wall after another as she tumbled all the way downwards. She landed on the narrow landing which opened out onto the floor below with a thud which knocked the glass eye from its socket and sent it skittering off into the gloom below. By the time anyone knew what had happened, Marion was dead.

Time passed and life, gradually, returned to normal. A memorial service was held for Marion, at which the choristers, including those from Long Dorm, had sung. Despite an extensive search, her glass eye was never found. A new matron was hired; one who was just as strict as Marion had been, but lacked the other woman’s kindness and sense of humour. The damage to the library, where the fire had started, was repaired. The cause of the fire was never firmly established, although a cleaner- an old man with a habit of leaving cigarette butts in the bins- was fired.

 At first, Jack was the same as ever. He was still just as loud and rude. He still stole chocolate and biscuits from the smaller boys and, by the time the summer term was nearly at an end, he was even fatter than he had been before.

 It was two weeks until the end of term when things started to change. Jack found himself waking, again and again, in the middle of the night. He would lie perfectly still; uncertain of what had woken him. And then he would see, in the corner of his eye, movement in the shadows near the door to the spiral stairs. Or he would catch the smell of burning. Or worst of all, he would hear the sound. It was like a marble, a glass marble, rolling along the wooden floorboards, starting in the corner and approaching his bed, before stopping abruptly, only a few feet away.

 When he told the others, he was ignored. Everyone knew that he was a liar and a trouble-maker. He had tried to scare them, or trick them, or bullied them in the past, and they were tired of it. When he tried to tell the teachers, it was worse. There was talk of sending him to a psychiatrist, murmurs that he wasn’t dealing with the trauma of Marion’s death properly.

 The end of term was greeted, as always, with much excitement. Long Dorm was a hive of activity long after lights out, as the boys excitedly discussed their plans for the long summer holidays which stretched out before them. Only Jack was silent. He lay in his bed, perfectly still, refusing to be drawn into any conversation. He didn’t even stir to join in with the customary midnight feast. He lay awake long after the other boys had fallen silent, finally falling into a light, fitful sleep.

 Jack woke a few hours later, covered in sweat. The room, always warm in the summer evening, now seemed unbearably hot. Without opening his eyes, Jack kicking the sheets away in an attempt to cool down. He froze as his nostrils were filled with the smell of burning. Gradually, he became aware of the sound of a glass marble being rolled along the floor of the dormitory. At first it was quiet, so soft that he wasn’t sure that he had actually heard it. It grew louder as it approached. And then it would stop, the sound quickly fading away as the marble switched direction, moving away from him. A moment later, it would start again, as it drew gradually closer to his bed. Each time, it would stop just before reach the place where Jack lay, his eyes firmly closed.

 Finally, Jack could bear it no longer. The smell of burning had grown so strong that it stung his nostrils and made his eyes water. The sound of the marble, the noise rising and falling as it moved around the room, echoed through his head so that he felt he would scream. He opened his eyes.

 Someone was standing at the end of his bed.

 The moonlight streamed through the window behind it, illuminating the figure from behind. All that Jack was certain of was that it was a woman. A woman dressed entirely in grey.

 The sound of the fire alarm ripped through the building. It wasn’t until the school had been evacuated, and the boys were gathered in the playground, that anyone realised that Jack wasn’t there. They searched the building, but the boy could not be found. When the new matron checked his bed she found, nestled in the crumpled sheets, a glass eye. Jack was never seen again.

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